WOW RUBY-J! This is wonderful! I love the transaction, and the part about YOUR waka in very entreating! You may have made 1 or 2 mistakes with the transition, and the text was a little hard to read, but that aside, great! Ka Pai, keep up the good work! Lucy.
Kia Ora Lucy, Thanks for the comment.I tried to fix the problems but I couldn't. I will remember to make my text easier to read next time Thanks again-Ruby-Janeππππππππ
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ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful! I love the transaction, and the part about YOUR waka in very entreating! You may have made 1 or 2 mistakes with the transition, and the text was a little hard to read, but that aside, great!
Ka Pai, keep up the good work!
Lucy.
Kia Ora Lucy, Thanks for the comment.I tried to fix the problems but I couldn't. I will remember to make my text easier to read next time
ReplyDeleteThanks again-Ruby-Janeππππππππ